tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4454804294678084718.post3929587428966061405..comments2021-03-21T11:48:45.790+00:00Comments on Mightier Than the Sword: Doctor Haik-whoPaul Carrollhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04498209913967406314noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4454804294678084718.post-15065147762587693992010-01-30T09:51:42.284+00:002010-01-30T09:51:42.284+00:00I love it! Based on the Girl in the Fireplace ^_^ ...I love it! Based on the Girl in the Fireplace ^_^ The clockwork robots that went back in time to get her brain for the ship... or was it the heart. Either way, they needed it. Brilliant episode!Paul Carrollhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04498209913967406314noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4454804294678084718.post-80652862333919087622010-01-29T23:20:45.414+00:002010-01-29T23:20:45.414+00:00Do, by all means keep writing them, they *are* goo...Do, by all means keep writing them, they *are* good.<br /><br />I would suggest trying something different with some of the next ones. In my own (completely amateurish) view of Haiku, I often see that the first two lines set up a point and the third line offers a counterpoint to it. That third line is often a variance on the theme of the first two lines. Does that make sense?<br /><br />Linked through a fire place<br />Seperated by slow time<br />Both Their Hearths Ablaze<br /><br />Guess the episode? :)Ken Armstronghttp://kenwriting.comnoreply@blogger.com